It had all the ingredients but didn’t quite get there, i feel like the story was meant t...

Riva_phoneix April 10, 2025 11:22 pm

It had all the ingredients but didn’t quite get there, i feel like the story was meant to be longer but was cut short for some reason. It’s good but could have been better. Their bodies are drawn *chefs kiss but the penetration sex scenes just looked uncomfortable rather than enjoyable to read there wasn’t really love making just banging away forcefully.

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    Mxyztree April 20, 2025 9:56 pm

    I felt the same way. I felt like the story was missing something, but I can't put my finger on it.

    Dani May 1, 2025 3:19 am

    I feel like this happens everytime with their works too, i was waiting for more when we saw him talk abt what the ML did to get close to the MC
    I’m so sad too i really like the concept :(