I'm extremely disappointed. Comparing this to "The Shape of Us," I'd say "The Shape of Us" is better. Both share a similar plot involving Two additional people in their lives, but this one feels bland. I was happy there was a child, but the author wasted that opportunity—skipping the pregnancy process entirely and jumping ahead five months. Then, suddenly, he's in heat again, leading to numerous intercourse scenes instead of meaningful storytelling. My disappointment is immense.
Also, what is "'JUST' the three of us together" Wake up, bro—there are two more of you (two more tops; you're not alone). (T⌓T)
Adding to my frustration, why did it start as if there was only one male lead who had already won? We can clearly see how much Uki loves him, but chapter 2 destroyed me.
I still can't accept how this story is progressing—so much potential wasted. ε-(ｰдｰ)
Anyway, this is really misleading. I thought Uki would have more in-depth storytelling, but it was just plain. ... Omg, I was waiting for triplets—triplets that look like the three tops! But guess what... we got another skip. NDBIWNFHINWHIE ... Continue... I don't know anymore...
Eyyy, but we do need to give credit to the time skip where the three tops spend time with the kid, also sharing stories about the past. I actually liked that—nice, author. (ദദ ˙ᗜ˙)
OH!! ISBJFHDB OMG NEVERMIND... TRIPLETS!!!! .. .... Lion's Uki is WHAT!?.. I'm sorry, but when? WHENNN? That freaking one time again. (T⌓T)(T⌓T) Seriously, what the... Anyways: • Art: 10000/10 • Spiciness: 6.9/10 • Story: 5.9/10 • My disappointed 999999999999/10 (I thought I found a Gem:D)
I would say if you have an interpretation of this story, you might find many small details that could have been expanded upon. Sadly, the author chose the most basic and fastest route instead of adding more depth, which is why, for me, this story is bland. Overall rating: 3 out of 5 stars.
If you're looking for something similar, I recommend "The Shape of Us." The spicy scenes are spicier, and it has in-depth storytelling that brought tears to my eyes and made me question my life choices.—If you're interested, a trigger warning: it may make you uncomfortable.
I'm extremely disappointed. Comparing this to "The Shape of Us," I'd say "The Shape of Us" is better. Both share a similar plot involving Two additional people in their lives, but this one feels bland. I was happy there was a child, but the author wasted that opportunity—skipping the pregnancy process entirely and jumping ahead five months. Then, suddenly, he's in heat again, leading to numerous intercourse scenes instead of meaningful storytelling. My disappointment is immense.
Also, what is "'JUST' the three of us together" Wake up, bro—there are two more of you (two more tops; you're not alone). (T⌓T)
Adding to my frustration, why did it start as if there was only one male lead who had already won? We can clearly see how much Uki loves him, but chapter 2 destroyed me.
I still can't accept how this story is progressing—so much potential wasted. ε-(ｰдｰ)
Anyway, this is really misleading. I thought Uki would have more in-depth storytelling, but it was just plain.
...
Omg, I was waiting for triplets—triplets that look like the three tops! But guess what... we got another skip. NDBIWNFHINWHIE
...
Continue... I don't know anymore...
Eyyy, but we do need to give credit to the time skip where the three tops spend time with the kid, also sharing stories about the past. I actually liked that—nice, author. (ദദ ˙ᗜ˙)
OH!! ISBJFHDB OMG NEVERMIND... TRIPLETS!!!!
..
....
Lion's Uki is WHAT!?.. I'm sorry, but when? WHENNN? That freaking one time again. (T⌓T)(T⌓T) Seriously, what the...
Anyways:
• Art: 10000/10
• Spiciness: 6.9/10
• Story: 5.9/10
• My disappointed 999999999999/10 (I thought I found a Gem:D)
I would say if you have an interpretation of this story, you might find many small details that could have been expanded upon. Sadly, the author chose the most basic and fastest route instead of adding more depth, which is why, for me, this story is bland. Overall rating: 3 out of 5 stars.
If you're looking for something similar, I recommend "The Shape of Us." The spicy scenes are spicier, and it has in-depth storytelling that brought tears to my eyes and made me question my life choices.—If you're interested, a trigger warning: it may make you uncomfortable.