i like this now

all the cliches out the way everybody has to learn the hard truth of the situation and how comedy is not going to smooth things over for both the victim and ther reader
i also like the complex feelings that the heroine is going through because it's not easy finding yourself when you're groomed not too
plus the environment where she's not allowed to either but it exists (outside of fairy tales) she not abused by her family so there's no urgency to abandon family or country either ╮(￣▽￣)╭