IT feels like the whole thing so far has just been 8 chapters of info dumping exposition
Since it's just explaining everything and nothing much is really going on, there's no emotional impact to anything. There's no weight to any of their thoughts or emotions because they immediately resolve and talk about everything so nonchalantly like it's no big deal.
It's cute and interesting but there's no real hook that's keeping me from getting bored.
IT feels like the whole thing so far has just been 8 chapters of info dumping exposition
Since it's just explaining everything and nothing much is really going on, there's no emotional impact to anything. There's no weight to any of their thoughts or emotions because they immediately resolve and talk about everything so nonchalantly like it's no big deal.
It's cute and interesting but there's no real hook that's keeping me from getting bored.