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Hideツ April 17, 2025 6:00 pm

Don't get me wrong, I read the entire thing. It was good at first but the story got wayyyy to intense?? Like they're young adults doing actual crimes The game concept had died, but I guess it really is just for the beginning of the story.

Eh, not really my cup of tea. The ENTIRE time I was scrolling halfway through the story I kept repeating "what the actual hell is happening right now". LIKE WHERE ARE WE GOINGGGG

Anyway the both of them are so cute I thought the story was flawless until they introduced the highschool ACTUAL LITERAL EXAGGERATED PSYCHOPATH. I grew to dislike it but I finished the entire thing anyway lolll.

I've read way more intense stories than this and I'm not talking about psychological stuff, I'm talling extremities. We can say this is "tamer", but I really think the plot was executed poorly on this concept. It's very out of place in my opinion.

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    Ilovetoxicyuri April 26, 2025 7:09 pm

    felt a little dragged to me i loved it sm when it first came out but then the plot started going a lil.. eh

    Nex._ilx May 1, 2025 6:50 pm

    Tbh ur right but you can tell how much the writing improves on S2. I hope maybe one day they redo S1