This is what happen when you make story at 15yo and got an okay to publish when you are 20ish yo.
Ngl, the premise is good. Die, wanna know why you die, and want revenge BUT GOD HELP ME WITH HER USELESS STUPID DECISION IN EVERY MOVE.
You almost die (again) because of horse and a man save your ass and called out your FULL NAME but plot twist you already died 6 month ago. HUH, so how does this man so sure its you? Aint no way he from the future too riiiiiighht (〜￣△￣)〜
You tell a maid to deliver a letter so daddy can pick you up after long sleep-over, well you know damn well the letter would be read by those brothers and high risk for being stolen but the next night, you went to hire an informant for the bitch that your ex husband fucking on the side? WHY NOT HIRE SOMEONE TO DELIVER THE FUCKING LETTER FROM THE START?! The bitch can wait. She not going anywhere and you cant do shit to her too since the bitch isnt yours at all.
The ML is someone from royal family and a soldier of shadow...? Why not captain? He got money to have one guild. And what part gave a long ass sword to a fucking twink of a lady a good idea? She stabbed a guard that trained and DIE..? I know the guard isnt dead but 2 of ML followers did said he would die if they let him which means that twink of a lady take long ass sword and stab him hard enough for him to bleed and die. FUCK THAT. And for her to ended up IN THE DUNGEON ITSELF like..?? WHY THE FUCK YOU STAB THAT GUARD THEN?! Just let them take you.
Oh look a NEW GUARD as USELESS AS HIS LADY. Fucking let his lady in coridor to fecth a water, bro put her in her room first! Mf your lady aint a special guest in that fucking household. Let his lady gone and LET HER BE IN A MAN ROOM?! MF YOU ARE HER GUARD! SHE A WOMAN, UNMARRIED, SLEEP IN A MAN ROOM AND THAT MAN IS IN THE SAME ROOM TOO!! If I'm your lady, mf I'm gonna executed you for being DUMBASS and tarnish my purity, you fucking bitch. The horse ride scene? FUCK YOU.
I know all of this for plot device but Jesus take the wheel for every unreasonable shit she did. Moreover these chara is the one that we supposed to like. The one that we are not supposed to like is more shithead with teenager tantrum and idiotic-stank ass brain.
This is what happen when you make story at 15yo and got an okay to publish when you are 20ish yo.
Ngl, the premise is good. Die, wanna know why you die, and want revenge BUT GOD HELP ME WITH HER USELESS STUPID DECISION IN EVERY MOVE.
You almost die (again) because of horse and a man save your ass and called out your FULL NAME but plot twist you already died 6 month ago. HUH, so how does this man so sure its you? Aint no way he from the future too riiiiiighht (〜￣△￣)〜
You tell a maid to deliver a letter so daddy can pick you up after long sleep-over, well you know damn well the letter would be read by those brothers and high risk for being stolen but the next night, you went to hire an informant for the bitch that your ex husband fucking on the side? WHY NOT HIRE SOMEONE TO DELIVER THE FUCKING LETTER FROM THE START?! The bitch can wait. She not going anywhere and you cant do shit to her too since the bitch isnt yours at all.
The ML is someone from royal family and a soldier of shadow...? Why not captain? He got money to have one guild.
And what part gave a long ass sword to a fucking twink of a lady a good idea? She stabbed a guard that trained and DIE..? I know the guard isnt dead but 2 of ML followers did said he would die if they let him which means that twink of a lady take long ass sword and stab him hard enough for him to bleed and die. FUCK THAT.
And for her to ended up IN THE DUNGEON ITSELF like..?? WHY THE FUCK YOU STAB THAT GUARD THEN?! Just let them take you.
Oh look a NEW GUARD as USELESS AS HIS LADY. Fucking let his lady in coridor to fecth a water, bro put her in her room first! Mf your lady aint a special guest in that fucking household. Let his lady gone and LET HER BE IN A MAN ROOM?! MF YOU ARE HER GUARD! SHE A WOMAN, UNMARRIED, SLEEP IN A MAN ROOM AND THAT MAN IS IN THE SAME ROOM TOO!! If I'm your lady, mf I'm gonna executed you for being DUMBASS and tarnish my purity, you fucking bitch.
The horse ride scene? FUCK YOU.
I know all of this for plot device but Jesus take the wheel for every unreasonable shit she did. Moreover these chara is the one that we supposed to like. The one that we are not supposed to like is more shithead with teenager tantrum and idiotic-stank ass brain.