wasted potential

clover leaf April 18, 2025 6:07 am

ch 31 rn and honestly the PLOT is good but the EXECUTION is bad. MC is stupid. ML is hot and looks calculating but is also stupid.

from the jump, why tf is her first thought to try to marry her sis off to someone else even if it was said in a novel u know ure in? like why don’t u just run away and time it right so they meet each other naturally? like they only kept getting caught bc ppl would rat them out like if they dyed their hair and lived in the forest or even in the commons it would’ve been fine they’d just have to be on the low, no?

ML is stupid bc why are u literally letting go of the dude u know abused tf out of his children even giving him a gold mine just to tell him to leave like… what? u literally saw he slapped the green out of her eyes bro how tf does it make sense that u just let him off like that. not to mention it’s honestly weird as fuck how i guess anybody can walk into the main lobby of the duchy like in manhwas dont they have guards and shit that require an appointment to even get inside? even if thats the girls’ father, ML and MC literally have a contract that states NO FAMILY MEMBERS SHOULD HAVE CONTACT WITH HER SISTER shouldn’t they be smart enough to tell guards “if u see these two men don’t let them in” ?????

Responses
    I don't read yaoi April 19, 2025 4:55 am

    You know what this reminds me of? Like an author whose ambition doesn't match their capabilities. When the author wants to write a cool and calculating character but because IRL the author is stupid, the characters inevitably also become stupid lmao

    Justarandomperson April 28, 2025 11:43 am

    Honestly, yk what's doubly stupid??

    MC assuming that ML was the original prince Lalisa would end up with in the first place???

    Bc like honestly the uncle wouldve been duke if MC hadn't stepped in, and his son fell in love at first sight with Lalisa. It's so ??? To see mc just didnt put 2 and 2 together and realized that ML's cousin was rhe original prince, but since she agreed to marry ML, he inherited the duchy instead of his uncle.

    Also ??? Why did she think that ML and the crown prince with a wife and kids would even be the candidates, given the age gap...

    Idk sorry i just ended up ranting dbhdhdhd

    clover leaf April 30, 2025 8:45 am
    Honestly, yk what's doubly stupid??MC assuming that ML was the original prince Lalisa would end up with in the first place???Bc like honestly the uncle wouldve been duke if MC hadn't stepped in, and his son fel... Justarandomperson

    dw lol, i was ranting too ur so right, there are so many stupid things about this manhwa and like what "I dont read yaoi" said, it's like the author wants to create intelligent characters without actually being intelligent lol

    ritsu May 27, 2025 12:37 pm

    Aint reading all this but u should read more lmfao

    clover leaf June 3, 2025 3:25 pm
    Aint reading all this but u should read more lmfao ritsu

    no point in reading more when the setup is dog