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u couldve just said the mc's writing felt unnecessarily childish instead of using the term CP holy shit
mb, i wrote this when I was really tired so I just threw my thoughts together and wrote this comment, I was just trying to convey how unnecessarily CHILDISH he felt as u said
this felt like childporn in disguise to me im sorry his character is written like some teen boy, and the way he just forgives him is so fucking stupid, so weird to make ur mc like a child w the whole interest in strawberries and sweets and then having him 'accidentally' opening a condom packet omg this was ass guys if u liked this please expand ur reading list or sum