3,5 out of 5 for me

Bananas April 20, 2025 7:32 pm

I enjoyed reading this story, but the ending feels a bit rushed and some important plotlines fell pretty flat.

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    LaPaTa June 14, 2025 7:20 pm

    Yes the plotlines fell pretty flat, bc it didn't feel like there was much proper leading up to it, especially the ramirez (pink haired girl) thing, like she's only ever BRIEFLY mentioned so her "tragic" death didn't feel like it at all
    Like ughh I loved this but KNEW from the start that it could be greater ┗( T﹏T )┛