I just can't like the MC, I hate whenever an author makes the MC immature and very naive. ...

Kip April 20, 2025 11:07 pm

I just can't like the MC, I hate whenever an author makes the MC immature and very naive. Even kids are not like that anymore, i know that i can't expect something realistic from a story like this but it would've been soo good! The ML is written decently, he isn't an asshole, he has his beliefs, I really hate when readers don't try to see every point of view and can't understand that the MC is not just bubbly and naive, he's not well written AT ALL lol

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    menwtiddies April 20, 2025 11:09 pm

    yup agreed!! but i also don't think him and ml go well together at all. i don't hate either but they lowkey dont have good chemistry to me

    Kip April 20, 2025 11:10 pm
    yup agreed!! but i also don't think him and ml go well together at all. i don't hate either but they lowkey dont have good chemistry to me menwtiddies

    Yes exactly you get it!!

    menwtiddies April 20, 2025 11:18 pm
    Yes exactly you get it!! Kip

    honestly, part of it might be what you refered i.e the mc being written so childishly and naively because he's sincerely just waiting to get taken advantage of

    Kip April 20, 2025 11:20 pm
    honestly, part of it might be what you refered i.e the mc being written so childishly and naively because he's sincerely just waiting to get taken advantage of menwtiddies

    It's the fact that the author doesn't even try to make him even barely conscious of what is happening. He's not a kid, it's just so unrealistic I hate it

    Yulin April 20, 2025 11:34 pm

    ML seems to be going down to be an hypocrite tho, and he could've rejected the "naive" MC's advances tho. So no, he is not good, the story is being forcefully driven. Nothing here screams "let's be reasonable adults" from A to the Z

    menwtiddies April 21, 2025 1:46 am
    ML seems to be going down to be an hypocrite tho, and he could've rejected the "naive" MC's advances tho. So no, he is not good, the story is being forcefully driven. Nothing here screams "let's be reasonable a... Yulin

    call me a bad person but i get him, guy is cute and he's having fun

    Yulin April 21, 2025 8:32 am
    call me a bad person but i get him, guy is cute and he's having fun menwtiddies

    Ok that explains, thx for the honesty