Read the whole thing in a day and it was honestly quite promising at the start but somewhere in the middle it came crashing down with corny lines between the fl and ml and a crazy plot of revenge without ever telling us exactly what they planned. The whole victory day and Christmas eve thing felt rush and unsatisfying. The villians in this were too stupid, unbelievably so. 2/5
Read the whole thing in a day and it was honestly quite promising at the start but somewhere in the middle it came crashing down with corny lines between the fl and ml and a crazy plot of revenge without ever telling us exactly what they planned. The whole victory day and Christmas eve thing felt rush and unsatisfying. The villians in this were too stupid, unbelievably so. 2/5