it's not supposed to be realistic. it's a one shot story, ofc it would be rushed plus this is obviously a fap gooner manhwa why are u expecting a top global story line
Baby, a one shot is one chapter, not multiple, I have a right to dish out constructive criticism if I thought it was ass. There was 12 chapters of this but the story or romance wasn’t properly written out. Hence the half assed writing. This is MEANT to be pwp, not pwop. So obviously if you decide to write out a plot and I take the time to read it I’m going to be disappointed that it’s bad.
Unfortunately I’m not a 14 year old gooner degenerate anymore, I will recognize bad writing and weird plot decisions and I will, as the consumer, say it’s bad.
Genuinely seen other authors write better things in an ACTUAL one shot or under 12 chapters it’s really nothing you can say other than the fact that the story and the romance is underdeveloped
you're saying all this while giving it three points despite of it having r4pe scene, what a hypocrite. i wasn't even justifying it, i was saying that this is afap gooner material and not some serious ass top goobal writing story.
Hypocrisy literally doesn’t apply in this context dumbass 3 stars because it had the potential to actually be interesting before it flopped. Put your thinking cap on homegirl.
Regardless it being “gooner material” doesn’t save the multiple points I’ve made. Look at it from a writers standpoint before you type your next reply.
Ts is unwiped ass you cheeks you are not changing my mind
Like genuinely what am I supposed to say sorry I don’t like shitty porn without plot half assed rushed stories??????? Herro.
The only good things I liked about this were the art and the dog being adorable.
Alot of things I don’t like, but let’s discuss the obvious part.
The rape at the end was absolutely unnecessary and quite frankly just disgusting.
The story overall feels rather rushed and boring. I feel like if you’re going to do something then do it all the way. If you’re going to create a story then put everything into it. Don’t half ass it or leave things unexplained, or rush into things. Our main characters had sex without even knowing eachother’s names. Seriously. How realistic is that. I mainly skimmed through the sex scenes because I didn’t even feel any chemistry between them.
(Do not reply to me if you’re trying to justify anything wrong with this manhwa, you’re wasting your time, trust me. Ts turned out to be ass and everyone and they mama know it.)