Childish, anybody else agree?

Xgxtxtxdxs April 21, 2025 7:34 am

This writing feels so childish, like it's filled with clichés and some of them are so forced. I should've stopped reading when the whole cat thing happened. I didn't think the writing could get worse but somehow it did ( ̄へ ̄)

Responses
    Miku Smudge April 25, 2025 5:43 am

    No fr I remember thinking this story was so good and then I realized I started reading this when my brain was shit

    Risaki April 25, 2025 11:52 am

    The narrating sounds like what 10 year old me would write

    Bloo April 26, 2025 1:41 am

    I read today’s chapter and was just thinking the same thing