
Nobody thinks yuri made by men are gross, AS LONG as the yuris themselves aren't gross and fetishizing; for example, Otherside Picnic, Adachi and Shimamura, Sasameki Koto were all written by men and they're amazing.
This one, however, definitely is gross and it's quite obvious it wasn't made/written with women in mind. That's all.

that's fine, everyone likes different things.
there is nothing wrong with someone making yuri made by and for men, even if it is sexual and fetishizing, if that's what they like.
just like there is nothing wrong with women making yaoi made by and for women, even ones that are fetishizing gay men.
the problem is that there is a double standard where stuff targeting a male audience is treated much more negatively, while the opposite is not the case.
everyone should read or not read what they like, it doesn't effect you if someone makes something you don't like.
Readable so far, but it's obviously written by a man for men, oh well!