This story is so ass

Vivi April 21, 2025 6:57 pm

I could write an essay about how terrible this plot is, but what I should actually do is go back on time when after chapter 60 I realized how MC was written as mean just to play it as cool and drop the manhwa instead of hoping it would get better

Usually we find edgelords in trashy shonen manga, but I present you THE female edgelord.

The fault is all on the author. He made her emotionless to portay her as strong, as if emotions were weaknesses. All the villain exist just to be bad. Xenox is bored, Montana is envious and Terzo's reason to be a villain is full bullshit. Why should you side with those who killed your fiancé trying to kill your fiancé's family???

The real villain was the god. He was like "Ino betrayed me, let's torture her descendants for eternity", when in reality Ino was crying because she didn’t want to hurt him, but he literally told her that she had to abort the child she wanted to have to cherish the immortality he had given her. #TEAMINO

This guys is the proof that you don’t make something good just by making it a tragedy. You cant make a story in 124 chapters and use the last one to say "lol and everyone lived happily ever after or whatever"

Responses
    Idc April 22, 2025 8:46 am

    I kinda liked it , very much enjoyed it
    But if you said it like that, it make sense

    Sasa April 22, 2025 9:17 am

    Lol I agree with you. Which is why I dropped it around ch 30. The FL just didn't interest me.

    GumjiNyoki ♥ April 22, 2025 9:36 am
    I kinda liked it , very much enjoyed it But if you said it like that, it make sense Idc

    I like it too, its a bit of a shallow story but i think not everything needs to be well thought off all the time. If thats that the we're all god with godlike story telling.

    This was a good for me.

    Jasper April 23, 2025 12:30 pm

    Now that you've said it.
    This was the exact reason why I dropped it like a year back.
    The art was good at the beginning but later on it felt like they were just trying to get it done soon :(.
    I can't bring myself to complete it even tho I want to read it......