You missed out on a verrryyy good one, I'm so sorry
Wait so you wanted the ML to a dick towards the uke? Who cares if he did a 360 the fact is that he changed and started to be a green flag towards the uke even if he's doing the 'omg I'm so horny for you' act it's a fresh air of the red flags and rape and S/A that's happening so much now..plus I'm pretty sure they didn't like him because he was a escort or an omega...And the acting like a thug not seeming very Seme like? Is a dumb comment because there's no standard for becoming a seme unless you want Rape and miscommunication then yea..plus he's a mob boss ofc he's a thug.. there's literally books about mafia bosses and how there being a thug so that comment shouldn't really be in there (and they did show him having the baby bump just not for a long time) But I don't see any plot holes but maybe that's just me
I just meant that I wanted the Seme to slowly fall for the Uke. Get it? SLOWLY. It all went so fast and the Seme was almost instantly in love with the Uke. They had over 50 chapters, they could've used 15-20 chapters for the couple to develop their relationship, otherwise it's a shallow one. At least for me.
This instant love gave me the impression that the Seme's the type to easily fall in love, but judging by his experience and sex partners, apparently he isn't. I don't know if the Uke is someone so special to the Seme that he fell for him but his background's not that special, considering he's a male omega escort, someone so common in the Seme's standards (as a slut).
In any case, it's all just too fast for me. I would've understood if this was a short, short story, you know. With less that 30 chapters. But they could've used at least half of the 50 chapters to develop the relationship between the two.
The thug part, I meant he's like a common thug. Which are background characters in a story with this genre. There are a lot of Semes who are thugs and gangsters, but what set them apart from the common ones is that they're smarter, or at least smart enough to control their men.
I'm also of the belief that the men reflect the personality of their boss. If his men had the gall to leer at and harass their boss's woman/man, that says a lot. Either the Seme's trash, or he's ignorant of his men's tendencies. Either way, that's just messed up.
The baby bump, yes I saw a small bump, that comment was my mistake. But the size just made it clear that they haven't been together that long. Which brings me to the comment where I said their romance is too fast.
And please, do note that the comment section is here for a reason. You don't need to read my comment if it's trash to you. I'm just stating my thoughts, not facts, and you can just disregard them if you don't like it.
Ok but I like being messy and starts arguments(jk)
It's bad. Just bad. Too many plotholes. The story doesn't make any sense. And their love story is too unrealistic and ridiculous (in fictional standards), I can't.
The art is decent, which is a bummer because the story couldn't keep up. There's no start and it irked me when people just mistreated the Uke when he's legally bound by a contract to stay there and be a surrogate. The housekeeper keeps giving him the stink eye for asking for food, like, HE'S FREAKING PREGNANT, YOU HAG! He's eating for two people for Pete's sake!
Punks just go in and look at him lecherously when they're aware he's carrying their boss's child, like EW! Get your horny asses out!
Also, what's with the complete 360 personality change of the Seme! We see him having sex in the living room under the same house as the mother to his child, to being the weirdly creepy husband. (He's weird and a creep, y'all. If you stop looking at him with rose tinted eyes you'd see it). He's also a little stupid, in general. Acting like a common thug you'd see as side characters in stories and not something Seme-like.
There's too many plotholes I just can't even keep up. Also, the characters talk too much nonsense and it's weird how much time has already passed with the Uke not showing any baby bumps yet.
Anyways, I couldn't bring myself to finish this. Which is a shame because I'm almost at the last chapter but I just couldn't take it so I'm out. Buhbye.