Idk comments are saying wholesome but I really can’t find it. I feel like everything is ...

nimnim juice April 25, 2025 1:04 am

Idk comments are saying wholesome but I really can’t find it. I feel like everything is moving so fast and their love makes no sense to me. So I feel awkward that Uke has feelings all of a sudden. Anyone else?

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    chocobuun April 25, 2025 1:38 am

    I mean short stories can still be considered wholesome. It being wholesome doesn’t mean the story/relationship is well written. Just that there’s no conflict in the story

    chocobuun April 25, 2025 1:39 am

    Anyways this author is known for having interesting premises for their stories but are generally all fast paced

    Naty Hunter April 25, 2025 4:45 pm

    No I get you
    I think the whole he tasted his blood as a child made it even weird
    Gives of childbride vibes

    Other than that I just think it's weird how fast the plot went from their first time to family, baby, etc

    chocobuun April 26, 2025 2:33 am
    No I get you I think the whole he tasted his blood as a child made it even weird Gives of childbride vibes Other than that I just think it's weird how fast the plot went from their first time to family, baby, e... Naty Hunter

    Wait I don’t get how it gave childbride vibes? Wasn’t the initial thoughts of the ML, thinking he could use the mc and eat/kill him to get power? ML never even thought of love or MC like that. Then he handed the kid mc to the long haired dude. 40 years passed and then the MC and ML met again. So MC is at least over 40 years old in current time lol

    Naty Hunter April 26, 2025 2:40 am
    Wait I don’t get how it gave childbride vibes? Wasn’t the initial thoughts of the ML, thinking he could use the mc and eat/kill him to get power? ML never even thought of love or MC like that. Then he hande... chocobuun

    Is just the vibes
    I'm not saying it was intentional or that ml did anything to mc when he was a minor
    I mean child bride more in the sense of a "arranged marriage that was set when someone was born"
    I can't explain it's just a feeling about how he tasted his blood and how it connected them
    Don't overthink my words

    nimnim juice April 26, 2025 1:48 pm
    Is just the vibes I'm not saying it was intentional or that ml did anything to mc when he was a minor I mean child bride more in the sense of a "arranged marriage that was set when someone was born" I can't exp... Naty Hunter

    Thank you ,this explains how I feel honestly. And I just really try to avoid stories that give or are that especially when it’s with an older partner.