So glad someone agrees with me I read this also year ago and gave it full 5 stars, I’d give it 3 now the plot is such a mess
That car scene the fire it was all
So random and thrown in, everything clutched that can happen in a Yaoi was thrown in
So glad someone agrees with me I read this also years ago and gave it full 5 stars, I’d give it 3 now the plot is such a mess
That car scene the fire it was all
So random and thrown in, everything cliched that can happen in a Yaoi was thrown in
Literallyyyy
....Listen I'm fucking crying what is this plot LOL. I thought I read this years ago but I seemed to have marked it as "dropped" for myself and got curious. So I be reading this rn. Lemme tell you smth, Keith seems pretty tame compared to other red flag tops tbh. Bro also got what he deserved when he got marked without consent. Serves you right for all the things you did, amiright. Which, is such a nice plot point that omegas are the ones that can mark alphas LOL.
Anyway, overall the story is pieced tgt a lil messily like, there's so many cut scenes and unrelated scenes that are explained way later or left unexplained. There's a bit of disconnect in how the story flows. Like what was that w dein. Man's came in w no real purpose and had an emotional pudding scene w no chemistry before that LOL.
IDK WHY I TYPED ALLAT. NO OKE COME FOR ME, THIS IS FOR MY REFERENCE OKAY
ANYWAYS. CAME TO TALK ABT THE RANDOM ASS SHOOTING AND CAR ESCAPE EP????
LOLLL