I genuinely think the story is very well written. Perspectives, I guess
Saying it's bad is sure an opinion
Fine, maybe it's the wizard of Oz. A girl without a brain, a boy without a heart, and a batshit crazy fiance who does the absolute most without a reason. Even the father, we never got a reason why he murdered a whole family. No one has any motivation behind anything they do. Why did MC choose to remain so helpless and dumb for 7 whole lifetimes? Why did Sion double down on murdering her even after realizing she couldn't be killed and didn't deserve to die? Why did the fiance latch on so strongly to a dumb girl he met once for 5 minutes when he was 10 years old? If we ignore the complete lack of depth on these characters, I can acknowledge that, yes, the story is written well enough to keep me reading.
I think you need to read again cuz all of this was explained and you're either misinterpreting it or missing it.
I understand what the author gave as "explanation" but it just doesn't seem sufficient in matters of life and death. Especially for MC
I don't really get what you mean by this but Laila has been trying her best to survive in each life she's just met with bad luck most times
Idk what your talking about but I'ma lay it down rn firstly the mc isn't dumb she literally made ways to get out of death to the point where she literally didn't care if she died, and she didn't remain "helpless" She didn't get any help for those escapes until the 7th life Which she decided to use the ML instead of running, secondly! Sion made a oath to his family that everyone in her family will die and he did not care that she didn't deserve to die he just did it for revenge and he said it himself anyone with that last name or even serve the father tea will die Thirdly! The finance didn't really react strongly to her until he came back because he forgot about her when he went away Forthly! If you remember The main characters often call the father a villain and how he doesn't care about people and will kill them for no reason, so the reason for why the father killed the mL's family is because he wanted too and that's it if you understand what the story is telling then it's a really good story
This story is soooo bad, but I keep reading it...
All the characters are soooo random. They just do stuff. Why? Cus plot, I guess.
The only character that makes any sense is Taylor and sion's sister.
But i like the art.