Thats a pretty fast phased for a chapter but a good flow for the characters... The timelaps is also nice could've waited for him to return or have more misunderstanding or drama.. Guess its main plot is straight to the point and more of their epic relationship
Thats a pretty fast phased for a chapter but a good flow for the characters... The timelaps is also nice could've waited for him to return or have more misunderstanding or drama.. Guess its main plot is straight to the point and more of their epic relationship