This had SO MUCH potential because their dynamic is pretty original. What ruined this story were the stupid sub plots/side quests. This story didn't need the werepeople, it didn't need the "war" with the other country, it didn't need the conspiracy at the end. If the author had used all of those chapters, in 60 chapters they could have developped the feelings of the characters more, I feel like Roel' s walking process should have taken a longer time, really, they could have done something more with this relationship instead of wasting time on something else. The worst part is probably the reincarnation plot. 0 explaination. When did she reincarnate? Did the family not realize what happened? Why does she talk as if she has known them forever yet the story shows that she had just reincarnated when the story started. That doesn't even make sense since she has all of the og mc's abilities. Like, the reincarnation plot wasn't even needed. The author could have made 60 chapters of the female lead not being reincarnated, but admiring Roel, to the point of wanting him to marry her and getting him out of his misery, and the story wouldn't change at all.
The thing is, the ideas weren't bad, they just aren't exploitable in such a short while, and end up ruining the interesting part of the story. Taking out the reincarnation part and giving it around 120-130 chapters of good plot, developping the subplots enough for us to care, and spending more time on their flourishing relationship would have been much better. What a shame :(
This had SO MUCH potential because their dynamic is pretty original.
What ruined this story were the stupid sub plots/side quests.
This story didn't need the werepeople, it didn't need the "war" with the other country, it didn't need the conspiracy at the end.
If the author had used all of those chapters, in 60 chapters they could have developped the feelings of the characters more, I feel like Roel' s walking process should have taken a longer time, really, they could have done something more with this relationship instead of wasting time on something else.
The worst part is probably the reincarnation plot. 0 explaination. When did she reincarnate? Did the family not realize what happened? Why does she talk as if she has known them forever yet the story shows that she had just reincarnated when the story started. That doesn't even make sense since she has all of the og mc's abilities. Like, the reincarnation plot wasn't even needed. The author could have made 60 chapters of the female lead not being reincarnated, but admiring Roel, to the point of wanting him to marry her and getting him out of his misery, and the story wouldn't change at all.
The thing is, the ideas weren't bad, they just aren't exploitable in such a short while, and end up ruining the interesting part of the story.
Taking out the reincarnation part and giving it around 120-130 chapters of good plot, developping the subplots enough for us to care, and spending more time on their flourishing relationship would have been much better.
What a shame :(