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MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY. the entire first few chapters went by so fast, and the plot feels like it's missing some noteable things. i like the characters, but even then they miss out on that building aspect that it all feels kinda dull
The pacing feels off. There wasn’t enough buildup between the characters to make the sex scenes feel earned—it all felt a bit rushed. It’s a shame, because the story itself seems interesting, and the art is amazing, but the writing just doesn’t deliver