Wow this is bad. Mc is just entirely covered with plot armour, whose only mission is to pr...

Lingz April 30, 2025 12:48 pm

Wow this is bad. Mc is just entirely covered with plot armour, whose only mission is to protect his girls and only troubles is his magician girl/comrades getting in danger. Neither his personality nor his OP abilities are remotely interesting.

Also, 4 chapters in and already 3 women. The magician girl is the peak of characters only added for fan service. From the "mouth to mouth resuscitation" and the stripping of clothes.

And Magician girl keeps collapsing from "intense magical energy emitted" by others or sth, but after collapsing she becomes completely fine with interacting with them afterwards, it is clearly just a show for the author to keep readers reading.

She has been saved by mc 3-4 times already for goodness sake, the epitome of damsel in distress. "One of the strongest magicians" but of course having zero ability to defend herself when mc is around.

Overall plot is not plotting and feels like it's made to be a money grabber by the author. Also needs a harem tag.

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