Tbh, this was good to me. I adore this Author. They have some really good work. This is my first time seeing this and I don't usually like to read Oneshots bc if I like the plot then I'd want more. I have a bookmark for OSs, but there aren't very many stories there because of that reason. I've read stories like this before and even have a bookmark for things like this. I wouldn't engage in it personally and if I knew someone who did, I probably wouldn't respond well to it BUT, when I read these types of stories, I HAVE to suspend my mind and imagination even MORE so than I do normal stories or fantasy ones or PWP ones. And then, afterwards, I have to go and read something wholesome to wash my mind afterwards,
But anyway, despite the uhhhh....familial relationship these two have (meaning they are literal family/frat. twins), I find it to be a pretty good story. A little short though bc what happens after Seme said that when Uke was asleep? Was Uke actually awake and heard? Did Seme tell him the next morning, week, month, etc.? Does Seme have feelings for Uke? Does he know that Uke has feelings for him? Like...it should have been a tad bit longer to answer a few questions. That was honestly a horrible place to end it. But oh well. 9/10 for me.
Tbh, this was good to me. I adore this Author. They have some really good work. This is my first time seeing this and I don't usually like to read Oneshots bc if I like the plot then I'd want more. I have a bookmark for OSs, but there aren't very many stories there because of that reason. I've read stories like this before and even have a bookmark for things like this. I wouldn't engage in it personally and if I knew someone who did, I probably wouldn't respond well to it BUT, when I read these types of stories, I HAVE to suspend my mind and imagination even MORE so than I do normal stories or fantasy ones or PWP ones. And then, afterwards, I have to go and read something wholesome to wash my mind afterwards,
But anyway, despite the uhhhh....familial relationship these two have (meaning they are literal family/frat. twins), I find it to be a pretty good story. A little short though bc what happens after Seme said that when Uke was asleep? Was Uke actually awake and heard? Did Seme tell him the next morning, week, month, etc.? Does Seme have feelings for Uke? Does he know that Uke has feelings for him? Like...it should have been a tad bit longer to answer a few questions. That was honestly a horrible place to end it. But oh well. 9/10 for me.