This could’ve been MILKED so hard! a 100 chapters AT LEAST.
I loved the premise and I love his personality but it would’ve nicer to see changes in his personality a slower pace. He would’ve been more interesting if we had seen him struggle between restoring his former glory or living in peace
HUGE missed opportunity to not have a war. Also a missed opportunity to see if Ray is still loyal to his homeland or his new family. Plus we would have found out if Eddie actually poisoned the tea or not.
Also this might not be popular but I really wanted to see Chris AGONISE over his feeling for Ray contrasting his loyalty to Jiskar. If they wanted to explore a love triangle at least give some time to the second dude.
Finally we don’t see the villains nearly enough to make us care. The least is to show us how they ended up at the end of the story.
This could’ve been MILKED so hard! a 100 chapters AT LEAST.
I loved the premise and I love his personality but it would’ve nicer to see changes in his personality a slower pace. He would’ve been more interesting if we had seen him struggle between restoring his former glory or living in peace
HUGE missed opportunity to not have a war. Also a missed opportunity to see if Ray is still loyal to his homeland or his new family. Plus we would have found out if Eddie actually poisoned the tea or not.
Also this might not be popular but I really wanted to see Chris AGONISE over his feeling for Ray contrasting his loyalty to Jiskar. If they wanted to explore a love triangle at least give some time to the second dude.
Finally we don’t see the villains nearly enough to make us care. The least is to show us how they ended up at the end of the story.
Over all a decent read that could’ve been better