Howe is super annoying and Torao is a delusional doormat, so putting up with this was hard...

w_iju May 4, 2025 4:11 pm

Howe is super annoying and Torao is a delusional doormat, so putting up with this was hard work, but honestly it could've been salvageable if the ending managedto work things through properly... but then they have half a conversation, fuck, and apparently things are okay now?? Like, I have no issues with flawed characters, so up until a certain point I was still vibing with their dynamic... but that's only if those flaws are properly acknowledged and worked through – which, in this case, they are frustratingly not. Like, be so fr man all that crazy ass act from Howe and you're NOT gonna at the very least acknowledge it??? I know Torao is like, a M and supposedly into it, but Howe stepped ALL over that man you can't just try to explain that shit away with "they're jusy freaky like that" and expect that to make a good story.

Anyways.... this was such a let down. It could've been great if they tried to explore how both Torao and Howe felt upon failing the expectation of being fated, and what that expectation meant for each of them-- like, Howe obviously expected to be an omega, but maybe considering how Torao is now he expected that he would be the omega?? Idk, there's a lot of good food for thought with their dynamic and this setting... but then the execution blew everything up to high heavens and I'm just mad now istg I'm making carbon-copy OCs like I'm playing house just to flesh out a proper ending for this setup

Well, the art is good at least ig, so pushing through the senseless plot was easier. As a whole tho this was just a let down unfortunately

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