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DeadBunny27 May 4, 2025 7:59 pm

the plot armor is too strong in this one (⊙…⊙ ) and we're just in the early chapters too.

This is another case of "unnecessary isekai". It just bothers me. The story can stand alone on it's own without that part. Make our girl actively change her life and look for the dilf of her dreams ┗( T﹏T )┛. Golden finger only works when the authors give us detailed lore and scenarios, not surface level descriptions. Like how did she bring her family's wealth back. Maybe show us her struggling a bit or actively dominating the business scene not just "she did this and she did that." It feels like we're thrown in the middle of the story and missed the important parts of where the MC's character should have taken shape and grow on you as a reader.

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