This was a nice read but it did have a lot of weak plot points. Like all the main plot points that drove the story were able to be taken away with no problem. Oh bro is gonna die, grim reaper is like 'lawl, pranked ya, lemme take that back' and suddenly it is fine. Then I dislike how the couple with the platonic lover was treated as someone who also prefers a platonic relationship. I feel like they just needed to have a real talk but things were kinda resolved by having seggs then talking a bit, I guess.
This was a nice read but it did have a lot of weak plot points. Like all the main plot points that drove the story were able to be taken away with no problem. Oh bro is gonna die, grim reaper is like 'lawl, pranked ya, lemme take that back' and suddenly it is fine. Then I dislike how the couple with the platonic lover was treated as someone who also prefers a platonic relationship. I feel like they just needed to have a real talk but things were kinda resolved by having seggs then talking a bit, I guess.