My favorite character turned out to be the original Rhyse with original Edith being the se...

Williokslaurel May 5, 2025 1:45 pm

My favorite character turned out to be the original Rhyse with original Edith being the second lol, Og FL only appeared at the end but fuck she's just too good a person.

Both FL and ML were likable, I expected to hate the ML for more than half the story but my dislike didn't last for long. He had one of the best character development for an isekai ML, I love how he was smart and observant enough to see through the voices in his head and the way he first thought it was just his guilt talking made me like him even more.
I liked the FL too but I found her similar to the FLs in this genre, sometimes she was too clueless for my liking and questioned some of her decisions.

The thing that bothered me most was how her kidnapper(scarred guy) let her go just because she shared her sad past for not even a minute and he suddenly developed a conscience and risked himself by betraying his employer. It's too cliche, unbelievable and too white lotus protagonist halo.

At first I absolutely hated how the Og FL was made to be the villain, still not fond of it because I feel most authors do that because they're not confident that they can make a MC more likable than the Og heroine to make us believe why the MLs and everyone would fall for them instead. It feels like a cope out. In the middle when Cliff started acting strange I got excited thinking that he's the one possessed for a change, it would be something new. But still the ending with the og Rhyss, Edith and all those reincarnated Ediths made it up I think.
I love the whole scenes with the voices, it wasn't introduced abruptly and I liked the stages of Killian at first not hearing to slowing realising of it's existence.

I hoped that at the end og Edith and og Rhyss would meet bur guess not. That would've been perfect.

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