they did the reveal dirty(70)>:/

notme May 5, 2025 2:56 pm

Love the story it's become one of my favourites, but the only downside for me is the cutscenes.
They are way too abrupt and it feels like we arrive in the middle of the conversation when we move location. Especially in chap 70, where there was the big reveal. It was literally so random and all of a sudden. I was so looking forward to it but it left me disappointed and with a bitter taste in my mouth because, even tho all the other scenes were fantastic and I waited for this since I first started reading it, we didn't receive any preparation for it and the convo which should've lead to to the reveal went missing somewhere. So yeah, I'm actually kind of mad of how they ended up doing it.

Plus, I get that they tried not to prolong the story too much with the plot cuz it's a romantic manhwa, but bro they went at 6x speed with that walking with the cure through the empire. From other stories I've read, 1 chapter of travel in this one equal at least 15 in normal speed.

The characters are chef's kiss, but the story itself is at times super rushed. And maybe because they tried to break the 4th wall too much(and the travel feeling too short, even tho they say they spent weeks on it) but the problems feel like were resolved way too quickly. Main character convenience/plot armor.
And the fact that they can go to the end of the world so fast like it's right next door from their home annoys me so much.




BBUUUUTTTTT other than that, I smiled and laughed at literally every chapter and I really enjoyed myself reading this story, so it's still a 9.5/10 from me.
Just wanted to vent a little cuz I know that this could've been even better than it already is.

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