now dont get me wrong, i love spy bls as much as the next guy, but something about this one is a little off. i fw the characters and the plot, but man it feels too fast paced yk? like the build up wasnt all there so the mc and mls relationship feels rushed into. its like what 16 chapters in and youre already acting possessive? maybe the author wrote it like this to make mcs future betrayal more hurtful to ml or something, but it just makes their chemistry feel lacklustre...
honestly if it slowed down a little i could see it being a darker version of red candy in a way (totes read that one btw if you havent!) but alas this is what we got ig;; (￣∇￣")
now dont get me wrong, i love spy bls as much as the next guy, but something about this one is a little off. i fw the characters and the plot, but man it feels too fast paced yk? like the build up wasnt all there so the mc and mls relationship feels rushed into. its like what 16 chapters in and youre already acting possessive? maybe the author wrote it like this to make mcs future betrayal more hurtful to ml or something, but it just makes their chemistry feel lacklustre...
honestly if it slowed down a little i could see it being a darker version of red candy in a way (totes read that one btw if you havent!) but alas this is what we got ig;; (￣∇￣")