The pacing is...
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Ml is 7 and fl is 13, the gap isn't that huge so it's fine unlike a certain...
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Is she gonna stay with the dude when he starts chaaing after the divorce? t...
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You, gray haired sir, better shut your trap. That mean you don't know your ...
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Really struggling with this one at times, I really enjoy all the tropes so I'm happy to stick with it for now but the pacing is pretty atrocious. Almost completely skipping over their first meeting and time together, absolute bulldozing through the childhood years, having her find the cure to her disease so quickly... At least the latter seems like it'll be coming back into play later, like maybe it's only really temporary and the "cure" will make her sicker in time. Overall, I'm sticking with it, but I wish they'd just take a second to slow down lol