The pacing is...

VernTheAuthor May 6, 2025 2:07 am

Really struggling with this one at times, I really enjoy all the tropes so I'm happy to stick with it for now but the pacing is pretty atrocious. Almost completely skipping over their first meeting and time together, absolute bulldozing through the childhood years, having her find the cure to her disease so quickly... At least the latter seems like it'll be coming back into play later, like maybe it's only really temporary and the "cure" will make her sicker in time. Overall, I'm sticking with it, but I wish they'd just take a second to slow down lol

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    Corphase May 18, 2025 5:37 pm

    Yes! Im even went to check another site in case it was wrong chapter 1 lmaoo