This is unreadable girl how tf you been eaten for over a fucking decade and then look up o...

May May 6, 2025 12:59 pm

This is unreadable girl how tf you been eaten for over a fucking decade and then look up one day and see a freaking sword and say oh so it has been laying there all this time (that just made her and all her suffering look stupid af)
Some developments are so abrupt tbh this had so much potential but it's badly written.

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    May May 6, 2025 1:00 pm

    Read ten chps

    May May 6, 2025 1:02 pm

    Also i was hoping it was yuri lost my shit when red head appeared but its okay cause he suits mc quite well

    Lovett13 May 13, 2025 3:37 am

    I felt it was because she was so engulfed in fear then she finally took a moment with clear eyes when she was tired of it. The sword might've been further away too since there were so many monsters it'd be hard to even get near it as well. My opinion though ..

    Dinodinodino May 15, 2025 6:45 pm
    I felt it was because she was so engulfed in fear then she finally took a moment with clear eyes when she was tired of it. The sword might've been further away too since there were so many monsters it'd be hard... Lovett13

    yea i totally agree. fear tends to blind you and when she finally let it go, she noticed her surroundings