Too bad, this has potential, But the overly exaggerated emotions and the weak and unchanging ways of ML and FL is frustrating. Even the trauma and reactions to that aspect are weak.
FL and ML mostly are not smart and doesn't seem to learned much of their past lives.
The cliché and cringe "protection" of FL from a fre words from the proce is just.... Oh and the unreal way the prince is behaving 80%of the time...
Overall, good potential for a story, actually bearable to read 15%
Too bad, this has potential,
But the overly exaggerated emotions and the weak and unchanging ways of ML and FL is frustrating.
Even the trauma and reactions to that aspect are weak.
FL and ML mostly are not smart and doesn't seem to learned much of their past lives.
The cliché and cringe "protection" of FL from a fre words from the proce is just....
Oh and the unreal way the prince is behaving 80%of the time...
Overall, good potential for a story, actually bearable to read 15%