i guess this is a purely smut kinda thing

more than i dislike stories with multiple love interests (not talking about poly stuff, not my thing but if its established as poly to begin with then no problem) i dislike stories with no communication, a whole load of nothing. there is nothing wrong with needing space and not wanting to have sex 24/7 but like this is all over the place? communicate? it was not paced correctly to the point where i dont find it worth continuing to read, i liked the fact the fl wasnt a pale tiny petite girl who cant stand up for herself for once but of course she doesn't get a good story to go with it