It's her story she can plot her how she please, you can write your own, I will be happy to read. But let's just read enjoy story and let be author be, cause she becomes author to make stories how she like them to be
Literally but none of them got the juice
Do you understand that this particular BL is in the explicit category?
Do you understand that there's a bunch of BL that's not explicit?
Do you understand that you dont have to read the explicit stuff?
i cant be critical of a lazy choice in the writing? This story is going no where and now the MC is being raped bc ig the author needs more time to plot this story? its just lazy imo.
do u understand criticism?
do you understand thats not the topic at hand rn?
do you understand people have their own likes and dislikes? one of mine happens to be lazy writing. If i minded smut i wouldnt be reading this. i MIND "oh idk how this plot should go, lets just do a sex scene for now".
Wooow you are just soooo boring person.... Rewrite same comment ╮(￣▽￣)╭
You don't get the concept of criticism you were just complain
cant respond to the comment meant for you? realized all my points we're correct and now u cant come up with anything to say? if ur mad about my opinion, too bad. build a bridge babe.
do bl authors understand that not everything has to be about sex? like sometimes possession or (in this story) eating is okay. wouldnt that be more relevant to the plot??? ig at least the plot moved forward in this chapter.