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icecoffee1111 May 10, 2025 4:02 am

1. this story is very long the start was okay the middle kind of boring but the end is getting more interesting
- its boring again i am struggling to reaad "so quit" "NO" im in to deep sadly
2. i thought the dad lost a leg so him having two legs was a suprise
3. not saying we never see him go pick up the umbrella bbuuuuttt
4. the profile noses... dear lord
5. wow never ending

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