I like the premise but it went by so fast. If the story took more time to develop the relationships and show things, it could've been better. I like the angst the story has but it doesn't let you simmer in it. They could've shown more the effects of their actions, but whatever. It's short and to the point to a fault, so some of the impact is lost. The backstory/flashbacks were too detailed, and some of those parts could've been summarized. The main story needed that much detail.
I like the premise but it went by so fast. If the story took more time to develop the relationships and show things, it could've been better. I like the angst the story has but it doesn't let you simmer in it. They could've shown more the effects of their actions, but whatever. It's short and to the point to a fault, so some of the impact is lost. The backstory/flashbacks were too detailed, and some of those parts could've been summarized. The main story needed that much detail.