Chapter 10

Layla May 12, 2025 2:11 pm

I tried my best & could make it till chapter 10. My reviews:

1. Whiplash for the reader--the shift from human empire to cat kingdom

2. Massive unacknowledged jumps in the story with no explanation

3. Juvenile art, dialogue... literally amateur shit.

I am sorry but this is it for me. Its a drop

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