It has great tension and it's also good at edging you that maybe, just maybe the Seme is finally gonna get his karma and will suffer for all his trickery, but NOPE everything in the plot goes his way even at the last minute, never had an ounce of character development lol. Uke found out that he was being tricked? zip him back into hypnoland; finally got him doing the nasty consciously? have him believe that doing it with yo bro is a-ok; oh no older bro got himself a bf? don't worry said bf was already pre-planned for hypno-ntr with another dude; Hyung would like to get away after finally realizing that what they're doing is messed up? pull him back by pulling the 'I only did it coz I wuv u UwU' wildcard; got stabbed? survive and then get your happy ending for god knows what reason hahahah.
I've read several psychological works where the intent of the story is to give that trapped feeling where the MC just can't catch a break to the very end or gets mindbroken, I get what the author was trying to do, but this work didn't do it for me, I much prefer the og short one-- it was shocking and left a lot to the imagination without going around in circles
It has great tension and it's also good at edging you that maybe, just maybe the Seme is finally gonna get his karma and will suffer for all his trickery, but NOPE everything in the plot goes his way even at the last minute, never had an ounce of character development lol. Uke found out that he was being tricked? zip him back into hypnoland; finally got him doing the nasty consciously? have him believe that doing it with yo bro is a-ok; oh no older bro got himself a bf? don't worry said bf was already pre-planned for hypno-ntr with another dude; Hyung would like to get away after finally realizing that what they're doing is messed up? pull him back by pulling the 'I only did it coz I wuv u UwU' wildcard; got stabbed? survive and then get your happy ending for god knows what reason hahahah.
I've read several psychological works where the intent of the story is to give that trapped feeling where the MC just can't catch a break to the very end or gets mindbroken, I get what the author was trying to do, but this work didn't do it for me, I much prefer the og short one-- it was shocking and left a lot to the imagination without going around in circles