I was wondering if it was just me, but from the comments, it seems a few people also had trouble with the story. It's hard to pinpoint exactly what's off. There isn't a segue between dialog and next scene in a lot of panels so it's like a skip making it feel like pertinent info is missing or sometime whole scenes. And maybe the translation is adding to the general confusion with the pace. I do like the story concept, and I still understood what was happening, so I was able to follow along. Overall I'm not disappointed since it was a short story but it's not going into my favorites pile.
I was wondering if it was just me, but from the comments, it seems a few people also had trouble with the story. It's hard to pinpoint exactly what's off. There isn't a segue between dialog and next scene in a lot of panels so it's like a skip making it feel like pertinent info is missing or sometime whole scenes. And maybe the translation is adding to the general confusion with the pace. I do like the story concept, and I still understood what was happening, so I was able to follow along. Overall I'm not disappointed since it was a short story but it's not going into my favorites pile.