I personally have some mild critiques but that is simply bc I'm an artist myself. Such as the incomplete hairlines. And when the artist adds blue it's contrast comes off high compared to the warm colors and that throws off the color palette. Cool colors on a warm palette already stand out so having them higher contrast throws the harmony off a bit and washes out the colors around them. (The contrast difference is honestly what bothered me the most i could ignore the lack of hairline bc a lot of 80's Shojo manga had vague hairlines as well lol and that to this day is a beloved art style).
On a more positive note, the style itself reminds me of "The Siren: Becoming the villains family" which has beautiful art, very whimsical. And because of that is separated its self style wise especially in the BL genre. Gotta love when they have a unique art style. Not that a lot dont have a style but it's like whenever you can tell an artist draws hentai lol just something about it shows in it and many BL art like that yk? This gives BL mixs with Villianess reincarnated/reverse time vibe arts iykyk.
I also appreciate an attempt to add more diverse characters. Freckles? Braids? Fantastic we love it.
As for the story the dialog is corny and I'm not sure if this is their first comic but it gives that vibe. I appreciate it none the less we all start somewhere.
I personally have some mild critiques but that is simply bc I'm an artist myself. Such as the incomplete hairlines. And when the artist adds blue it's contrast comes off high compared to the warm colors and that throws off the color palette. Cool colors on a warm palette already stand out so having them higher contrast throws the harmony off a bit and washes out the colors around them. (The contrast difference is honestly what bothered me the most i could ignore the lack of hairline bc a lot of 80's Shojo manga had vague hairlines as well lol and that to this day is a beloved art style).
On a more positive note, the style itself reminds me of "The Siren: Becoming the villains family" which has beautiful art, very whimsical. And because of that is separated its self style wise especially in the BL genre. Gotta love when they have a unique art style. Not that a lot dont have a style but it's like whenever you can tell an artist draws hentai lol just something about it shows in it and many BL art like that yk? This gives BL mixs with Villianess reincarnated/reverse time vibe arts iykyk.
I also appreciate an attempt to add more diverse characters. Freckles? Braids? Fantastic we love it.
As for the story the dialog is corny and I'm not sure if this is their first comic but it gives that vibe. I appreciate it none the less we all start somewhere.