Forgettable

MJC May 14, 2025 11:37 pm

The story is forgettable tbh... the back stories got revealed after Joyul had closure with Yijun. I almost think they're an afterthought. Because of this, Author missed the opportunity to make an impactful ending for the characters. I think the plot had potential, but the storytelling made made it lose it's substance.

I almost rooted for an incestuous relationship between the blonde brothers. I was hoping they're not real brothers. I think it was the most interesting relationship here. But again, missed opportunity.

And Joyul's abuse as a child in the orphanage, did I miss the part where the abuser got punished? They beat up the whistle blower but that's it? I was hoping for an intense or dramatic reveal about Joyul's past but it fell short again

I wasted precious hours for this. I didn't drop it because I was hoping it will get better. It didn't.

I skipped through the smut scenes because they were boring and didn't add much to the characters' dynamics.

Was this written by a teenager?

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