Was looking forward to a crazy yandere MC, but ngl, she’s kinda cringe. Obviously she has some mental issues but the way she’s written with her monologues, it makes her seem like some hard bad ass, but once she’s in actual danger she can’t do shit, like she’s just an edge lord. The way her expressions are drawn doesn’t help either, makes her look like she’s way over her head. It’s honestly kinda cringey to read through. I hope it gets better later on though
LOUDER FOR THOSE IN THE BACK!! you are so right, she is supposed to be strong and comes of as pathetic in front of ML!! There's only a few moments where she has good comebacks or comes off as a badass, but she suffers so much humiliation that it's quickly forgotten broooooo
Was looking forward to a crazy yandere MC, but ngl, she’s kinda cringe. Obviously she has some mental issues but the way she’s written with her monologues, it makes her seem like some hard bad ass, but once she’s in actual danger she can’t do shit, like she’s just an edge lord. The way her expressions are drawn doesn’t help either, makes her look like she’s way over her head. It’s honestly kinda cringey to read through. I hope it gets better later on though