this fell short in my opinion. the main story is pretty much just sex without much explanation in regards to the main plot. the side stories feel like they just crammed in the explanation to satisfy the readers and even then there are graphic rape scenes (completely unnecessary) and it really didn't feel as developed as it should be. sure its a short story, but they couldve included more fragments of yoosins past in the main story so as readers we wouldn't be so left in the dark about the actual plot and the relationship between yoosin and the snake. side stories couldve been a happy ending for the two of them but nope we get graphic rape scenes. you couldve used those panels for something else but nope. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
this fell short in my opinion. the main story is pretty much just sex without much explanation in regards to the main plot. the side stories feel like they just crammed in the explanation to satisfy the readers and even then there are graphic rape scenes (completely unnecessary) and it really didn't feel as developed as it should be. sure its a short story, but they couldve included more fragments of yoosins past in the main story so as readers we wouldn't be so left in the dark about the actual plot and the relationship between yoosin and the snake. side stories couldve been a happy ending for the two of them but nope we get graphic rape scenes. you couldve used those panels for something else but nope. ╮(￣▽￣)╭