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finally someone who feels the same way bro like where is this going they js start having sex and it keeps goimg on and om
Nah, it is. It has the major beats down, but the details are all over the place. It’s like they didn’t have an editor for it. Even so, overall I’m enjoying the story, I just need to not think about its pacing issues.
Umm am I the only one that thinks the plot is all over the place? And it's moving so fast I can't even empathize with the characters... It feels too rushed... That's just how I feel and I'm kinda disappointed because the art and the idea and pretty good! But the whole thing feels forced...