I really love the story about the interloper. It's interesting and creepy. It sent shivers down my spine. You know what, sexual tension would be better in this kind of genre. The rape was kinda out of it, considering that the ML is a supernatural being. Sexual tension will not only add to the charm of both character, but will also jive with the mystery genre. Though, overall, I love it.
I really love the story about the interloper. It's interesting and creepy. It sent shivers down my spine. You know what, sexual tension would be better in this kind of genre. The rape was kinda out of it, considering that the ML is a supernatural being. Sexual tension will not only add to the charm of both character, but will also jive with the mystery genre. Though, overall, I love it.