I don't understand the rape scène at all... And this is going to sound a little messed up...

EnokiMatcha May 16, 2025 5:06 am

I don't understand the rape scène at all... And this is going to sound a little messed up but I feel like it would of veen more affective if instead of rape, the just like...beat him. And the mugo comes and goes bat shit crazy...there was an opportunity to feel real pain as a reader but instead feel disgust that the sweet statement mugo said kind of flies over your head. At least for me it did

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    Bb33 May 16, 2025 5:10 am

    I completely agree I feel like a lot of writers just throw rape into the story for no reason and it doesn’t even matter for the plot