I don't understand the rape scène at all... And this is going to sound a little messed up but I feel like it would of veen more affective if instead of rape, the just like...beat him. And the mugo comes and goes bat shit crazy...there was an opportunity to feel real pain as a reader but instead feel disgust that the sweet statement mugo said kind of flies over your head. At least for me it did
I don't understand the rape scène at all... And this is going to sound a little messed up but I feel like it would of veen more affective if instead of rape, the just like...beat him. And the mugo comes and goes bat shit crazy...there was an opportunity to feel real pain as a reader but instead feel disgust that the sweet statement mugo said kind of flies over your head. At least for me it did