first of all, story jumps from one place to another very quick.. which makes me feel that I might've skipped a page or two, hence pacing's weird, very weird. Most the times it feels like the Author can't decide exactly what part of the plot they want to focus on.. like sometimes it feels they want to talk about seme's traumas but then all of a sudden we're talking about uke's trauma then we're back to seme and all of a sudden new character and then we forget seme's trauma and back on track 1.. It's all very mumbo jumbo.. and the seggs, someone save me from it.. There is no need for it, it's still there.. I get it, I really do! Yaoi can't be without smut, yes, but unnecessarily using it way too much also kills the joy.. I be like oooooh now it's getting interesting and bam some random stuff
first of all, story jumps from one place to another very quick.. which makes me feel that I might've skipped a page or two, hence pacing's weird, very weird. Most the times it feels like the Author can't decide exactly what part of the plot they want to focus on.. like sometimes it feels they want to talk about seme's traumas but then all of a sudden we're talking about uke's trauma then we're back to seme and all of a sudden new character and then we forget seme's trauma and back on track 1.. It's all very mumbo jumbo.. and the seggs, someone save me from it.. There is no need for it, it's still there.. I get it, I really do! Yaoi can't be without smut, yes, but unnecessarily using it way too much also kills the joy.. I be like oooooh now it's getting interesting and bam some random stuff