i’m so glad i’m not the only that wished we moved a little slower

dani28 May 18, 2025 12:13 pm

i hate when writers just add sex scenes as an excuse to not write feelings showing up organically. I would’ve waited at least 10 chapters for eunsan to see ian in a sexual way, bc tbh up until now eunsan wasn’t even looking at him in anyway other than an old friend. Give it like 10 chapters and give us moments where maybe eunsan looks at ian and thinks he looks good, then maybe he starts to realize he likes when ian touches him, stuff like that. It just feels so out of nowhere when for the past couple of chapters eunsan gave no indication he would be doing that with ian

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    TerracottaPie May 18, 2025 2:20 pm

    Agreed. This would've been so good as a slow burn with sexual tension that takes time to boil over. This chapter was disappointing and didn't make much sense for there dynamic.

    dani28 May 18, 2025 3:34 pm
    Agreed. This would've been so good as a slow burn with sexual tension that takes time to boil over. This chapter was disappointing and didn't make much sense for there dynamic. TerracottaPie

    yeah bc why would eunsan agree to doing that with ian, unless we had a couple of chapters of him starting to show attraction to him but what do i know

    pinkcoholic May 18, 2025 3:43 pm

    i completely agree and i love how this story had the Ian yearning for Eunsan, it made it so much more interesting the sexual tension made it exciting. i dont understand how we ended up here with him randomly jacking him off, it doesn't match Eunsan's personality and especially since he never gave the Ian indication that he was into Ian in that way it just feels so forced

    TerracottaPie May 18, 2025 4:14 pm
    i completely agree and i love how this story had the Ian yearning for Eunsan, it made it so much more interesting the sexual tension made it exciting. i dont understand how we ended up here with him randomly ja... pinkcoholic

    Yeah it's so weird how despite there being no indication of any attraction on his part he just accepted it with no hesitation and started giving directions. I'd expect that kind of interaction from people who've already been sleeping together or at least been very clearly into each other it makes no sense to me.

    TerracottaPie May 18, 2025 4:24 pm
    Agreed. This would've been so good as a slow burn with sexual tension that takes time to boil over. This chapter was disappointing and didn't make much sense for there dynamic. TerracottaPie

    Omg *their

    dani28 May 18, 2025 4:50 pm
    Yeah it's so weird how despite there being no indication of any attraction on his part he just accepted it with no hesitation and started giving directions. I'd expect that kind of interaction from people who'v... TerracottaPie

    exactlyyyyy